Research & Planning: 16/20 (A) Construction: 39/60 (C)
Your magazine demonstrates a good understanding of conventions and makes some effective use of fonts, images, and layout.
Targets: • Make the previously suggested improvements to the front cover (To improve you magazine consider adding a different font style for some of the coverlines. Try to make the Noah and the Whale pug more eyecatching. Don't forget to add a date and price. Consider changing the Topman coverline to something about a discount.) • Complete the contents page (what’s on pages 13, 14, 15?) With your page numbering remember that most articles will run to at least 2 pages and there will be pages of adverts as well. It’s very unlikely a magazine would only have 15 pages. • Put a page number next to the Morning Runner text, and consider putting a pull-quote from the article next to the picture. • Put a headline in larger different font on the news story, and put the page number in the same font at the headline. • Add page numbers to the contents and double page spread. • Add a standfirst and captions to the double page spread. • There is too much empty space at the end of the interview. Add more text.
You currently have 69% which is a high C. You need to ensure you make the necessary improvements as this will help you to improve to at least a B grade, and possibly an A grade overall.
Research & Planning: 16/20 (A)
ReplyDeleteConstruction: 39/60 (C)
Your magazine demonstrates a good understanding of conventions and makes some effective use of fonts, images, and layout.
Targets:
• Make the previously suggested improvements to the front cover (To improve you magazine consider adding a different font style for some of the coverlines. Try to make the Noah and the Whale pug more eyecatching. Don't forget to add a date and price. Consider changing the Topman coverline to something about a discount.)
• Complete the contents page (what’s on pages 13, 14, 15?) With your page numbering remember that most articles will run to at least 2 pages and there will be pages of adverts as well. It’s very unlikely a magazine would only have 15 pages.
• Put a page number next to the Morning Runner text, and consider putting a pull-quote from the article next to the picture.
• Put a headline in larger different font on the news story, and put the page number in the same font at the headline.
• Add page numbers to the contents and double page spread.
• Add a standfirst and captions to the double page spread.
• There is too much empty space at the end of the interview. Add more text.
You currently have 69% which is a high C. You need to ensure you make the necessary improvements as this will help you to improve to at least a B grade, and possibly an A grade overall.